Score: 9

"A good start"

submission: RocketRun

date: October 3, 2009

theres a lot going for you here. I see a good flash, and a could be addicting game, the music works really well (and for those who doubted my song not working with a game over i think this works great of course I'm biased) now heres what you gotta do. Make it get even harder its a really slow game. Remember the helicopter game. Its success was because of the difficulty of the game it got harder as you want on and you noticed it from the start. also maybe add a story, like "oh my god the rocket it trying to escape from the astroid belt guide it through, but be warned this is the outer belt the further into the belt the more dense it becomes". idk :) otherwise your good.

Score: 10

"haha"

submission: Pokemon: Pee Red Version

date: August 5, 2009

"want to see my pokeballs" :) really good job and the ending rocked the ole massingo trick infinate rare candies and master balls "wanna see my master balls" :) really good :) one of the better sprite animations ive seen

Score: 10

"do I here disney"

submission: Red Riding Hood

date: August 3, 2009

this is so good its like you could sell your idea to disney and they could make it into a whole movie it was very beauty and the beast esque or maby tim burtan cause it was more dark idk :)

Score: 10

"this is really good :)"

submission: Pencilmation #7

date: August 3, 2009

Hilarious I could definitely see this before a pixar movie you have a bright future ahead of you

Score: 9

"compelling"

submission: "IF"

date: June 19, 2009

it was good and although i wasn't a fan of the art style i loved the piano solo you wrote for it. good job the animations were great and so was the sound I was a little confused with the story. who is this girl why is she getting arrested and what has this man done. Hes obviously done something bad with a gun. did he kill a man, was she his accomplice. what? all these questions can sometimes be good, cause it make people wanna come back for more so they can maby catch it a 2nd time but sometimes too many unanswered questions is not good maby in your next one try to include these types of things

Score: 6

"im really confused"

submission: Cage it

date: June 11, 2009

um first off as the person who wrote the song i must ask, what were you thinking when using it. The song doesn't fit. I mean aby if it was like a western theme or something but even then the song is supposed to be set in a quiet town where something could possible happen. plus the game was way too easy

Score: 9

"A Great Improvement"

submission: Generic Sprite Flash: 2

date: June 11, 2009

I was kinda Iffy about letting you use my song because the first one I will admit was just ok, but after seeing this i see you are improving tremendously. Keep it up

one thing i will say though you transition into my song too early, in this sort of feel lets just say its an actual game, the theme would not start untill you reach the town but you have it starting 4-5 seconds before at which you could which i think you hould put a main adventure like theme, which i could write for you if you would like in the same feel as the town but adventurous. I mean other then that its good, I laughed and felt entertained which is good. but every single part you have audio whih in a no voiced video like this on should be always unless or a dramatic pause, every aspect of the game should have its own them so when your in town, you hear the town theme, on the field the adventure theme, in the dungeon dungeon theme get what im saying. I would love to write you a theme for all aspects. so like your fireball guy shoulda had a theme, that gets more intense when he shoots the fire ball. Im not sure if you wanna do this or if this is just a hobby, but when using music, use it as glue to hold your flash together. Maby im biased but the music is the most important part to a movie. Watch a movie with little to no music. its boring as hell then watch star wars where each part has music, and its exciting or watch a sad movie and the music makes you wanna cry. just try as a now lets say it film maker to convey your art in more ways then just by animating it

Wow this is really long :)

Score: 10

"this has to be the coolest mf game ever"

submission: Epic Battle Fantasy

date: May 25, 2009

ok wow this game is soooo cool i mean realy would woulda thought that a final fantasy game spoof would end up being the coolest game on this site. its sooo adicting. You did a great job and whoever did the music it was awesome.

Score: 10

"quite addicting"

submission: Age of Bunnies 3

date: April 27, 2009

:P idk what to say this is a fun game besides the low production values its fun and thats all that matters in my book

Score: 9

"haha just noticed that was my song"

submission: A Bee RPG 2

date: April 16, 2009

really good start just a few things though first music then game wise

1)the town theme should loops throughout unless your in a battle because technically your in "town" otherwise it sounds cheesy
2)maby im biased but i think you should stick with one style of music so if you wanna go the old rpg style and stick with my town theme thats one route or if you wanna go the newer rpg and go the trance/technoish types of songs thats also good your choice, but you should really pick one or the other. If that means dumping mine thats fine or if it means you need me to write you some stuff *cough cough* it works i would love to write music but i have had no insperation to write stuff to go along with it, where as i wrote the town theme for something. let me know

As far as the game is concerned it was fun, and is a good start, just a few things.
1)there needs to be a loss of some sort when you die otherwise its like ok i died now i wasted a day woopdidoo maby make you loose 10hp from you total or you loose a piece of armour or an upgrade idk.
2) the final boss is too easy i beat the game in like 20 days with like 150 HP and 50 strength and the good stinger and i killed him in like 3 hits even though he had 100 more hp then me.
3)maby add a story or somthing why is this bee attacking random things (for pollon) gotcha but maby tell us why hes doing this or maby hes fallen in love with another bee and the king bee has taken her hostage or idk. also why are you attacking the king bee is he evil ussually the boss is evil or somthing like that. thats what an RPG is about the story, why do you think we all play final fantasy games i mean honestly they are not nearly as fun as super smash bros, but what has sold more games final fantasy and zelda have because they have really good stories

well i hope this helped do be shy if you need more music just ask