Score: 10

"wow"

submission: Aria di Mezzo Carattere [WIP]

date: November 16, 2009

4 hours. really? lol I tried doing this and it took me about 8 for the length that you had, and I just had string quartet lol. Maybe I'm just slow, but I also did it by ear (did you). lol Good job none the less. :)

Score: 8

"you have something"

submission: mario mario mario... mario!

date: November 4, 2009

you have something going on here, but I think some of your piano articulations need to be fixed, you have a bass line that overpowers the melody at times, and it doesn't seem to fit. also there are parts that don't seem like mario I heard zelda and lord of the rings, then finally mario near the end. also the ending needs work. Now i know this sounds like everything is wrong. but those are just what I saw wrong, I really like the majority of it as a whole and individual parts :)

Score: 9

"I really like this"

submission: H C D M ft. land of castle

date: November 3, 2009

I really liked a lot about this, except I don't think some of the high beeps really fit into it, other then that I think you have a really good think on your hands. keep it up :)

Score: 8

"this in definitely interesting"

submission: nocte minimal I

date: November 2, 2009

I think you have something started, but I don't think the piano fully represents what I hear. I think I hear some sort of video game loop during the 16-bit era, I think with some orchestration you could have a pretty nifty tune

Score: 10

"we are VG buddies :)"

submission: [DjBjra] Battle of New Friends

date: October 6, 2009

both are songs are in that rocket game which which kinda sucks, but the music rocks :) I think this is such a great song, it has that sonic feeling, or something similar. There not much for me to say about this because its so good

Score: 8

"its mixed quite nicely"

submission: Bloody Spy!

date: October 5, 2009

It is mixed quite nicely, dont get my wrong you have a really good background, but you need melody to intrigue the audience, all you have is the bass line as the melody. good job on the under parts though

Score: 10

"Come all ye faithful meets narnia"

submission: Danger in the Town

date: October 4, 2009

haha the opening motif is come all a ye faithful in a minor key, the 2nd is from narnia, and you pretty much combine them both to make an awesome composition :) im not saying you stole them you did it in a way that it sounds similar without sounding ripped off good job keep it up I'm jealous of you :)

Score: 10

"this is really good :)"

submission: In the Battle

date: October 4, 2009

this is awesome I really like how it would work for a game or a movie :) I do agre the orchestral would be amazing, but right now its fine lol. Is there anyway I could see the score for this its really good and i'd love to see your orchestration :)

Score: 9

"Overall I liked it"

submission: Ice Cream Man!

date: September 27, 2009

I really enjoyed it a lot the lyrics were awesome the music was awesome also, but I think rather then just saying the verses you should actually sing them when you sung the chorus its really good but I think the verses should have a melody to it otherwise it just doesn't seem right also at 00:26 you try using a note in a certain mode and i think it would be better off using the note half step or 2 above that give it a more smooth sound. these are just my suggestions and over all like I said i really though it was good :)

Score: 10

"Stupendous"

submission: Toccata

date: August 25, 2009

This is probably one of the best live recordings ive heard here on newgrounds. Composition wise its not flawless but its jaw dropping, and it definately inspired me.

what music school do you go to and what year are you, because im at arizona state in the composition school and I just started i hope I can even come close to something that good

keeps it up 5/5, 10/10, favorite